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Vampz! Web Series (Pilot)
Hello everyone,
We are a group of four friends who got together one day & said f**k it! Let's make a web series! We hope that you will give us a chance and leave some constructive criticism on our project. Thank you!
You can find our video here:
Tags: comedy, horror, humor, series, vampires, vampz, webisode, webseries
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Permalink Reply by W O of Love to Feel on -
The pilot is AWESOME! One of the best I've come across on Web Series Network and on the internet in general. For criticism the only thing I can think about is maybe an issue of semantics. Your series flows like a traditional show or even a movie because it feels full and complete.
When people think web series they usually associate it with shorter content.
Personally I loved the length of the pilot. I think that if you have a good story you can get away with longer episodes, you just have to market a bit differently. I know some other people don't like longer series. I'm one of the few that believe the reason why web series are short isn't because of attention spans, its because of $$$, resources, and good storytelling ability that goes beyond 5 minutes are rare.
Speaking of $$$ and resources my only thoughts for feedback would be related to filming. If you haven't filmed a season yet - do it ASAP. Don't let time and the randomness of life aka murphy's law get in the way of completeing an ending. It would suck for you work so hard and build up an audience only to leave us hanging on episode 4 of what was supposed to be 10.
Bravo guys! Bravo! Someday I wish I'd be able to film a fiction show that at least matches the standard you created with Vampz! Cheers for deadly cheerleaders!
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Permalink Reply by vampz webz on -
First of all, thank you so much for your encouraging and kind words. Those mean a lot. We're all amateurs who have no experience in filmmaking whatsoever, so every word of encouragement means a lot to us.
For our future episodes, we plan on making them shorter, but not sacrificing any of the storytelling. We've already planned out a good first season story arc and completed the writing on two further episodes. Unfortunately, money is an issue with us, so we plan on initiating a Kickstarter campaign. While it's not a guarantee, maybe it will bring some (much needed) attention to our project.
Although, as I stated, we are complete amateurs, we'd be more than happy to give you any advice on your future endeavors.
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